Extra after episode 10
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This work will be improved in the foreseeable future
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Pride & Prejudice
- Jane Austen
I want a recap episode, but
It can't be boring, therefore
We'll focus on a side character, but
Very briefly mentioned and not so important in Jin's life, therefore
It's the merchant that buys from adventurers, but
We need more details to engaging, therefore
The merchant is a middle-aged woman and a dwarf, but
She's always been single and supports her aging foul mouthed father, therefore
Her father can be annoying but asks about her day, therefore
She talks about the village Chief’s son having a new love rival
It's talk about Jin Embler, but
It can't just be the merchant's opinion, therefore
The merchant talks about her chat with the adventurers that found Jin in the forest, but
It's important that the conversation centers on Jin bring in common from their common sense, therefore
Jin's clothes, body language, accent, knowledge and his low-level selfishness are described, but
The adventurers acknowledge and soon dismissed these observations as Jin being a weird human, therefore
The merchant had chewed on these observations and brought it up with her own father
The merchant's father was a former citizen of the Pioki dwarves in Laconia, but
Too much detail will make the conversation boring, therefore
The merchant daughter pauses, finishes telling herfather about the adventurers' insights, to gauge her father, but
He calmly plays coy waiting for the merchant to make her own analysis, but
Not much more timecan be spent on this scene, therefore
The merchant first states her own conclusion that Jin is of another "world" (as in civilisation and environment)
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