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X3 not 3, as we've noticed in a lot of things, things have to change the script has to change. I'm basically going to force you to like. Think about what we make s*** deep for you. That's the interesting thing you would say. What conflicts make it deeper but still fits dramatically into selfishness in what not and can still work through to the finale. Hence I want you working from the back. You've experienced everything going forward. Obviously you want to work backwards so that you can just remove anything that doesn't fit. Going backwards, that's fine at 3 part. One scene, 1 in this scene. We were talking about the females of the dwarf. Households being raped as obviously not a majority but a decent percentage. Of civilization here would be bores as they followed at dwarf leader here and the dwarf fixed up his own reputation. And so forth over time with being a good colonizer. So it's, it's not that the dwarfs have been targeted, but they're also being made an example of so it is a play of racism. As the giant is trying to bring his own soldiers but also blows. So he also asked him why is the big butt. Yeah, so I'm not sure. This needs to change, but here we're trying to exert the dominance and a new order that the men have either been called or cooked. And what matters now is the stronger smart. Er winner nails along with their females and the choices that they can make is the new second class citizens and the first class citizens and the no class citizens order. Song, we're gonna talk about like with each act. I introduced an element which is practically the symbol. We did that before going into act 2. So if we see characters existing into act, 3 nights because they existed from maktuna. Soldiers, the soldiers have cemented themselves and they now exist as salt, so yes, it's very vital. It does helpe of slavery and what not however. If salt thrown into the soil can kill plants and that's what the soldiers are. They are clearly demonstrated as both poison and medicine. A few of the things we can say about the soldiers. That they are addicted. They do not work no longer they do not cause wool, but they a real love of scruff. They loved a fight and without the soldiers. The changes that came to this land would not have happened, so they are clear catalysts of change. They are digging things moving. So these are very competent with these soldiers and now they're plans for the future art to submit themselves as a way going into into the land and colonizing but. Also defining themselves enough that obviously they saw how they killed an entire colony. They have to prevent the motherland and other colonies from trying to take Uber. Because clearly this colony was as frequent as a project and itself. That doesn't mean the Empire would allow it to just exist by itself. They obviously partnered with other. They are up with other nations and created other kinds of colonies. What's the best way to talk? And then then the environment has changed. The Cos 4 the first civilization here. This place would have been like a gateway threshold on the coast and few advantage points in a hexagonal shape and so forth. But because these guys have come up. The tone is completely cheap. Just for the environment and circumstances with it. So the environment for the soldiers is a clear community where it's not the survival of one with the survival role. They all watch each other's backs. They all make sure that so long as we protect each other. Have proper networks checking on each other. Make sure nobody snatches or is to trade or anything. We can also buy Evan prosperity glorious for glory garden gold. That's at El Monte so. So the environment for the.
Soldiers is a clear community which is not the survival of one, but a 7 level low. They all watch each other's facts. They all make sure that so long as we protect each other. Have proper networks checking on each other. Make sure nobody speeches or is to trade or anything. We can also buy it in prosperity. Glorious for glory garden gold. That's that's the amount of so their locations. Now, at these 6 fortresses, they're like a lawn. You see how a lawn is in front of your house. It's like a decoration. It's the repurposing of nature. And changes everything, so it's since for a static or emotional reasons, but we have taken over the land. No that's act one x three at three part one c one
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