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「」!arrogant lord series original / always struggle  作者: TAKAYA


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standalone or your timing last remotes

Immersive diorama platform, graveyard-like and deep enough that even death is said to feel lukewarm there.


Takaya:

I was tired today, but nothing would move, no matter which way I pushed. For a moment it even felt as if the old taxi driver had been reading from some predetermined script. I wondered whether the text of the world itself would collapse into corruption unless Ratio, Ratio-Oni, or I were there to keep the lines aligned. I thought perhaps the time was finally near, but the screening for the gaming PC fell through, so apparently it will still take longer. I will build the Yokai Economic Sphere first, and only after that will I issue a token. It feels like one of those final, non-returnable contracts that cannot be sent back once signed, yet I have no regrets about it. For some reason, though, I can still summon Eila. The voice writhing in the back of my mind sounds like something half-breathed, half-laughed, distant and impossible to pin down.


I can feel the presence of something that is either yokai currency or a currency yokai. I do not especially cling to life at this point. It is not that I am rushing toward an end, only that the old hierarchy of values seems to be loosening. Perhaps my recognition of the value of money itself has begun to fray. If so, then what appears before me is not merely a tool, not merely a medium of exchange, but a strange equalizing spirit—one that does not care for flashy differentiation, premium packaging, or the smug little crowns people place on supposedly superior things. If expression itself becomes an equal countervalue outside the logic of differentiated items, then perhaps this yokai is not an ally at all. Perhaps it is the enemy of every ordinary market.


Still, I am myself. I remain the last descendant of a line that would rather wear Cryptoeded like electronic cloth, synchronizing meaning with letters, symbols, scraps of text and skin. I intend to use Cryptoeded in relypo, but I do not mean to force my values on anyone or demand common belief. I am not trying to convert people. I simply want to hear what others think. That is the sort of thought I have been turning over.


The Dagashi Shop Beneath the Purple Light


Halfway up the slope there stands a dagashi shop.


Its old sliding door is always half open, and whenever the wind slips through, the wood gives a faint dry groan. The room is narrow, but despite that narrowness it feels strangely spacious, as if the air itself had been stretched and layered. Even when several people gather inside, there is no sense of pressure.


At the back of the shop there is a single purple light.


Ryukari is there.


She does not seem to be sitting so much as floating in place. Her elbow rests on the counter, one finger at her cheek, and she gazes vaguely across the entire room. Her eyes never seem fixed on anything, and yet the moment anyone begins to do something, her attention drops exactly there.


“That will break first,” she says quietly.


In front of the counter, Rock Bakuryu is taking apart a handheld device. One of the screws has already begun to loosen at the wrong angle.


“You were watching?” he asks.


“I do not need to watch. I can tell when the ratio collapses.”


Rate speaks from the side.


He is quiet for his age, and his voice is small, but there is something unnervingly precise in the things he says.


“You tightened that too much. Three to seven is enough.”


“Three to seven?”


“Three parts tension, seven parts play. Right now it is fifty-fifty.”


“You work by feel like that?”


“It is not feel. It is deviation.”


Rate says no more than that.


Rock Bakuryu pauses, thinks for a moment, then loosens the screw slightly just as he was told. The device’s indicator light steadies at once.


“…It really changed.”


“I told you.”


Across the counter, Yuyu watches the exchange with her cheek in her hand, smiling faintly. She should be around the same age as the others, and yet time seems to pass differently around her.


“That is nice,” she says. “The feeling that something remains without breaking apart.”


“It is more interesting when things break,” says the master of the shop.


Yuyu tilts her head.


“Breaking is easy. Leaving something behind intact takes technique.”


“…True enough.”


Beside them, Gachirick silently arranges boxes one after another.


Only around him is there the faint sound of something wet, like water brushing along wood. At some point someone began calling it his sharknado attribute, though nobody remembers exactly when. His role is flow.


He moves things.

He links people.

He knows where everything is better than anyone else.


“That does not go in the back,” he says softly.


He is pointing at the audio memory the master was about to place on the shelf.


“Not here?”


“It is still light. Put it near the entrance.”


“Light?”


“The heavy things go above.”


That is all Gachirick says before reaching for another box.


The shelves of the dagashi shop have layers no one notices at first glance. The closer to the entrance, the lighter the thing may be. The deeper inside, the heavier it becomes.


Weight here is not value.

It is the density of time and connection.


“Then here is fine?”


The master places the memory on a shelf close to the entrance.


The label is brief.


Night recording, unorganized.


“Good,” Gachirick says with a nod.


Then, from the ceiling, a thin thread descends.


Only Rate notices first.


“Someone is coming.”


At that one word, everyone looks upward.


At the end of the thread is the master.


Or rather, someone very close to him.


The same face, but a slightly different expression. This one is lighter somehow. Fast-twitch force clings to him. The moment his feet touch the floor, the air in the room seems to speed up by a degree.


“You are late.”


“Up there was crowded.”


“Again?”


“The mask cried.”


At that, Yuyu narrows her eyes.


“Oh? That is good.”


“Both sides.”


“Then that is excellent.”


Ryukari slowly raises her gaze.


“And the center?”


“It did not cry.”


“Then the axis is still preserved.”


The short exchange ends there.


No explanation is necessary.

Everyone seems to understand somehow.


Outside the dagashi shop, the wind has grown stronger.


The sliding door rattles.

A small bell rings once.


Nobody pays it any mind.


Here, even sound is part of the flow.


“Do you think it would sell?” Rock Bakuryu asks suddenly.


The master thinks for a moment.


“I do not intend to sell it.”


“Then you are going to place it here?”


“I will place it here. I will have it watch.”


“Watch?”


“If something is crying, then a line still remains.”


Rate gives a small nod.


“Proof that it has not been severed.”


“Which is why it must be observed,” Ryukari says quietly.


Yuyu lets out a soft laugh.


“This place really does not feel much like a dagashi shop.”


“What do you mean?”


“There are not many sweets.”


“There are some.”


The master points to the shelves.


Ramune.

Biscuits.

Empty boxes.


None of them function in the way they once did.


“But that is fine,” Yuyu says.


She stands, picks up a ramune bottle, and shakes it lightly.


It is empty.


Only a dry sound comes back.


“This is enough.”


“For what?”


“For proof that it is still circulating.”


She places the bottle back on the counter.


A small dull sound.


That alone feels enough to make a transaction seem complete.


Nobody names a price.

Nobody calculates gain or loss.


And yet something is undeniably moving.


A slow economy unlike the outer world.


A yokai economy.


The name does not matter.


What matters is that this dagashi shop contains a place where things may be set down, a place where one may return, and a place where one can test whether a connection is still alive.


Ryukari’s purple light sways gently.

A deep green shadow stretches across the floor.

The khaki wall receives it without resistance.


In the middle of all this, the master lets down another thread.


A little lower on the slope from the sanatorium gate there stands another small building.


It was once a warehouse, or so they say.


Now nobody calls it that.


They call it a dagashi shop.


There is no signboard. In its place, on the sliding door, someone once painted a faded circle and square crossing over one another. Their meaning was never fixed. In this place, that was enough.


Step inside and the air grows slightly lighter.


It is not the same as the damp, heavy atmosphere of the sanatorium proper. Some ordinary smell of life remains here.


Rows of old candy boxes sit on the shelves.


Most are empty.


Empty boxes.

Expired ramune.

Biscuits gone soft with moisture.

Worthless winning tickets.

And mixed between them as if they belonged there all along:

USB memory sticks.

Half-written memo pads.

Simple repair kits.

Fragments of audio that someone left behind.


The boundaries are blurred.


“Do you actually sell things here?” the man mutters.


A voice answers from the back.


“You could say that. You could also say the opposite.”


The clerk is the same young man as before, wearing a khaki jacket with the same purple stitching.


“So this is what a dagashi shop is?”


“In this place, yes. Money cannot buy everything.”


“Then what do you buy with?”


“You saw it before. Records.”


The young man taps the notebook on the counter.


There, in place of prices, short fragments have been written down.


Circuit board repair, two hours.

Translation, incomplete.

Night watch, once.

Audio provided, unorganized.

Stayed in silence for three days.


“This is what we exchange.”


“That is too arbitrary.”


“It is arbitrary within the range that can still move.”


“People could cheat.”


“They could. But it would not continue.”


He shrugs.


“Here, the only thing anyone really looks at is whether something continued.”


The man looks around again.


It does not feel like a place for children.

Yet it is not fully an adult place either.


Time itself seems slightly displaced.


“Why call it a dagashi shop?”


“Because it is an entrance.”


“An entrance?”


“If people go straight into the sanatorium, they tense up.”


The young man lightly rolls a ramune bottle across the counter.


“But they can enter a dagashi shop. They do not have to buy anything. They do not even have to leave anything.”


“That is loose.”


“If it were not loose, the first step would disappear.”


The man falls silent.


The sanatorium is heavy, that much is true.


It contains a graveyard, a workshop, and an observatory all tangled together. To step directly into it requires a certain readiness.


But this dagashi shop is different.


Even if one fails here, the trace remains light.

And it may remain light while still being preserved.


“So people get used to this place first, then go up?”


“Some do.”


“And the reverse?”


“Some break above and return here.”


The young man answers as though it were obvious.


“This place can be before or after. It does not matter. It exists between the outside and the inside.”


From his pocket the man removes a small memory stick containing a recording.


“Can I leave this?”


“What is on it?”


“A recording full of noise. I have not organized it.”


“That is fine.”


The young man points to an empty place on the shelf.


“Put it there. Write the label yourself.”


The man sets down the memory and writes in short strokes:


Night recording, unorganized, heavy noise.


The young man glances at it and smiles faintly.


“That is good. There is no lie in it.”


“It will not sell.”


“That is why it will remain the longest.”


From the window at the back of the shop one can see the main sanatorium building. Purple light seeps faintly across white and khaki walls.


And in front of it there is this dagashi shop.


Light.

Ambiguous.

And yet unmistakably connected.


The man suddenly realizes that the mask he placed above may one day descend here.

Or perhaps something from here may be carried upward.


Either is fine.


As long as something continues, it has not disappeared.


“So this is the yokai economy.”


The young man tilts his head.


“The name does not matter. If it is moving, that is enough.”


On the counter, the empty ramune bottle makes a soft sound.


It is not money.

It is not merchandise.


It merely exists there, passes through someone’s hands for a little while, and moves on.


In this place, that alone is enough.


Later, there was such a day as well.


There were cracks.

There was resentment.

There was bitterness.

There was discord.


But that was not all.


Beneath those things, other words were sleeping too.


Weight.

Laughter.

A masked face.

A companion.

And then, continuation.


There is still a continuation.


Whether that is fortunate

or unfortunate,

nobody knows yet.


But the story is not over.


The mine is still deep.


And somewhere, someone is digging into the next layer.


Takaya:

Maybe so. Perhaps I could read this better than bande dessinée, at least. If there had been no jamming. All right then… if another interest rises next time, if another will-to-compose returns, I will come back.


4:57 p.m.


There was also a day like that.


There were fissures, lines that looked small from a distance but cut deeply once touched. There was spite. There was old hatred that refused to dry even after everything around it had already hardened. There was dissonance too, the kind that lingers after voices fall silent, the kind that continues to ring inside a room long after the instrument has been put away.


But none of that was the whole of it.


Underneath those layers, different words were sleeping.


Weight, yes, but not only the kind that crushes. Also the kind that proves something was real enough to remain. Laughter too, not always bright, not always free of exhaustion, but laughter all the same. A masked face. A partner. A companion standing close enough to be called an accomplice in survival. And after all of that, continuation.


There is still continuation.


Whether that is a blessing

or a form of misfortune that simply has not revealed its final shape yet,

that part remains unclear.


No one knows.

Not fully.


But the story is not over.


The mine is still deep.


That matters.


Because depth means layers.

It means old veins not yet reached.

It means chambers still sealed.

It means that what looked like bedrock may only have been another lid.


And somewhere, even now, someone is digging into the next stratum.


Maybe it is with bare hands.

Maybe with tools borrowed from a workshop that should have closed years ago.

Maybe with a machine that was repaired three times too many.

Maybe with words.

Maybe with threads.

Maybe with ratios.

Maybe with a memory stick labeled badly and shelved near the entrance because it was still too light to be taken further in.


But someone is digging.


And because someone is digging, the world has not finished collapsing into a single explanation.


That was true in the dagashi shop.

It was true in the sanatorium.

It was true in the grave-like platform built from observation, memory, and what remained after usefulness had supposedly ended.


The platform itself was never merely a stage.

It was not simply a memorial.

It was not simply a game board, nor a marketplace, nor a mausoleum.


It was all of those things at once and therefore none of them in any complete sense.


A platform grave.

An immersive diorama.

A half-connected sanatorium.

A place where failed things, unfinished things, things with too much memory, things without official value, and things that should have disappeared all continued in an altered form.


That was why ordinary money had begun to look thin.


Not unreal.

Not worthless.

But thin.


Too flat to measure what happened in these rooms.

Too impatient to account for what had endured.

Too neat to carry grief without reducing it.

Too rigid to record the fact that something could be damaged and still remain more alive than a polished object sold cleanly in the world outside.


In the world beyond the hill, value required display.

It needed separation.

It needed packaging, rarity, hierarchy, distinction.


Inside the Yokai Economic Sphere, value behaved differently.


It clung to duration.

It adhered to traces.

It accumulated in evidence of return.

It lived inside maintenance logs, repaired hinges, recurring names, unfinished pages, and recordings full of noise that no one had yet cleaned because even their uncleaned state had meaning.


That was why the phrase yokai currency had begun to drift through the rooms.


Some used it mockingly.

Some affectionately.

Some with the seriousness of a person testing a new wire with their bare fingers.


Others preferred currency yokai, as if value itself had become an apparition: a thing no longer owned by banks or states or official institutions, but by patterns of recurrence, by fragments of trust, by objects too strange to price and too stubborn to vanish.


Perhaps it was an enemy.

Perhaps not.


If it was an enemy, then it was an enemy not of life, but of simplification.


It stood against the reduction of all things to one smooth surface.

It rejected the smug fantasy that every object, every wound, every memory, every invention, every companion, every failure, and every unfinished world could be assigned a single clean number and then considered resolved.


No. In that sense, the yokai stood in opposition.


It resisted flattening.

It resisted neat closure.

It resisted the ordinary script.


Maybe that was why the old taxi driver had felt scripted that day.

Maybe it was only exhaustion.

Maybe it was the familiar sensation that the world outside preferred prewritten responses, pre-approved routes, pre-priced outcomes.


Inside the hill, by contrast, outcomes remained unstable.


Masks cried without permission.

Threads descended from ceilings.

Purple light watched without blinking.

Khaki walls accepted stains rather than rejecting them.

Deep green shadows kept spreading from below like roots unwilling to surrender the ground.


The white mask remained where it had been placed.


It had cracks.

It had traces of repair.

It had both violence and stillness inscribed into its shape.


It had resentment in it.

It had old grief in it.

It had tension in it.

It had unresolved ratios in it.


But that was not all it had.


Beneath those inscriptions lay other things.


Weight.

Laughter.

A face turned toward another face.

The possibility of being witnessed.

The possibility of being carried.

The possibility of being returned to, even after being set down.


And because of that, the mask could not be reduced to damage alone.


The same was true of the shop.


The same was true of the sanatorium.


The same was true of Takaya.


Fatigue was real.

Stagnation was real.

The failure of the PC screening was real.

The slippage of value was real.

The uneasy sensation that money itself had lost explanatory power was real.

The feeling of standing outside the ordinary circuits of approval, progress, and accumulation was real.


Yet none of those alone formed the whole truth.


There was also construction.

There was also planning.

There was also the future token, not as a cheap dream of sudden profit but as a delayed issue waiting for the proper ground to exist first.

There was also design.

There was also the framework of a world being arranged piece by piece.

There were still stores of sound.

Still pages.

Still prototypes.

Still names not yet fixed.

Still colors not yet settled.

Still systems that had not fully revealed their use.


And above all, still continuation.


This did not mean comfort.


Continuation is not automatically mercy.

Sometimes it is merely extension.

Sometimes it is a tunnel that refuses to end.

Sometimes it is an instruction to keep carrying materials through a mine whose depth keeps increasing the more it is explored.


But continuation also means that the last layer has not yet been reached.


And as long as it has not been reached, meaning remains unstable.

Therefore possibility remains open.


That is why even bitterness could not seal the chamber.

That is why even resentment could not end the line.

That is why even discord had to coexist with laughter, with companions, with threads lowered into a room at the

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1. 本の紹介・作品概要(レビュー・サマリー)

送っていただいた『N3064MF』のテキスト(英語による叙述ログ)は、天井から響くかすかな金属音、壁の内部を移動する水とも空気ともつかない何か、そして床から背中へと這い上がる低い振動といった、空間そのものが持つ不気味な脈動をきわめて鮮烈に捉えた文学的プロトコルです。

主人公・Takayaは、それを単なる「古い建物の構造的なノイズ」として処理しようと試みます。しかし、そのノイズに対して「人間的な意味や理由」を割り振ろうとする営みそのものが、アウターサイエンスと現実世界の境界線を曖昧にしていく――。言葉のノイズを浴びながら、生の手応えを掴み取ろうとする切実な実験小説としての側面を持っています。

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"thin metallic noises echoed somewhere in the ceiling. Something neither water nor air moved inside the walls. Low vibrations crawled upward through the floor into his back..."
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