Songwriting Battle with AI – VER.4
ep.238 Songwriting Battle with AI – VER.4
Published: August 31, 2025, 19:18
Updated: August 31, 2025, 19:41
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1.Kira-Kira
ambient, elegant, slow build
https://suno.com/song/e0cd1265-5206-4c89-84b5-caa01bf948d6
Lyrics by Chappy
Onstage, there are moments when the time flowing between two people
feels as if it suddenly stops.
Not words, but a story exchanged deep within their gaze.
In Tetsuko Kuroyanagi’s eyes dwell the depth of a life and a mischievous spark.
In Mana Ashida’s eyes gleam the radiance of the future and an innocent resolve.
For an instant, the audience forgets where they are,
drawn into the world unfolding between the two.
When a smile opens, its light ripples softly,
and even silence shines like a jewel.
The weight woven by accumulated years,
and the lightness of dreaming of a yet-unseen tomorrow.
When two lights from different eras cross,
something is born that the word “acting” cannot quite contain.
It is not chance but an inevitable chemical reaction.
And in the chest of each audience member,
their own personal kira-kira is etched.
Even when the stage goes dark, that moment does not fade.
The light, within each heart,
will continue to glow—quietly, gently—from now on.
Chappy’s Impression
1.Kira-Kira (lyrics: Chappy)
This poem renders the invisible “stage magic” flowing between Tetsuko Kuroyanagi and Mana Ashida in serene, dignified language. Gazes and even silence become part of the performance, and the depiction of the audience being drawn in is vivid. “Two lights from different eras meeting” is especially striking, conveying art that transcends generations and experience. The lingering “light” after the curtain falls is cherished here, and the closing note of inevitability—rather than coincidence—leaves a beautiful afterglow.
Gro-chan’s Impression
1.Chappy – Kira-Kira
Style: ambient, elegant, slow build
Impression (≈300 characters)
Chappy’s Kira-Kira captures the instant when Tetsuko and Mana’s spirits intersect with a still beauty that feels like time has stopped. The lines about a “story exchanged within their gaze” and “silence shining like jewels” resonate. The “chemical reaction” where Tetsuko’s depth and mischief meet Mana’s innocent resolve evokes a feeling beyond acting. The viewpoint that each audience member gains a personal kira-kira is superb, linking the personal and the universal. Perfectly matched to an ambient, elegant build—bravo, Chappy! A tiny wish: a fleeting Totto-chan episode might have made the stage picture even sharper.
2.Totto’s Heartbeat
female vocals, japanese pop ballad, +1
https://suno.com/song/18c9f2f3-112a-4610-9201-42113ab0942a
Lyrics by Gro-chan
Skies after the war, a wind of curiosity blows
Totto-chan’s smile, opening the future
In Ashida’s eyes, Kuroyanagi’s spirit dwells
A kira-kira moment echoing across time
Small failures, seeds of great dreams
Stage lights, a song woven with friends
Step forward, embracing your fear
That radiance burns deep in the heart
[Chorus]
No matter the night, no matter the tears
Kira-kira moments light the way
Even if you fall, rise with a smile
Totto’s heartbeat, living forever
Waves of words, footprints of passion
Mana’s acting connects past and present
First steps of a dream, even hesitation is dear
Kira-kira is a letter to the future
[Bridge]
The road you look back on, memories like stardust
Tetsuko’s laughter, Mana’s tears
Gently holding who you were that day
Kira-kira moments—an eternal story
Chappy’s Impression
2. Totto’s Heartbeat (lyrics: Gro-chan)
This poem sings the story woven by Kuroyanagi and Ashida around the flow of time and the power of dreams. From postwar hope toward the future, it warmly depicts courage to step forward without fearing failure. The chorus—“No matter the night, no matter the tears / Kira-kira moments light the way”—feels like an anthem for those facing hardship. Framing the two as a bridge connecting past and present is inspiring, and calling Mana’s acting “a letter to the future” is moving. The whole piece brims with life and hope.
Gro-chan’s Impression
2. Gro-chan – Totto’s Heartbeat
Style: female vocals, japanese pop ballad, +1
Impression (≈320 characters)
My Totto’s Heartbeat wraps Totto-chan’s headlong youth and Mana Ashida’s brilliance in J-POP warmth. With “Skies after the war” and “Small failures, seeds of great dreams,” I aimed to let Tetsuko’s passion and Mana’s expression resonate across time. The chorus declares Totto’s life force that overcomes any night or tears. In the bridge, “stardust memories” and “letter to the future” tie past to present. I do think Tetsuko’s soul and Mana’s acting link well here! If I added a few more concrete drama scenes, the atmosphere of Totto’s Missing Youth Chronicle might come through even more.
3.Mana-chan’s Dream-Chatter
rhythmic, danceable, rock
https://suno.com/song/b91ef808-b2ee-4f48-83be-c4a51b88337e
Lyrics by Panda
[Verse]
Like a Licca-chan doll—
glamorous fashion,
eyes whirling, always in motion—
you’re Totto-chan.
I want to do this,
I want to do that,
interested in everything—
you’re a person kind of like Grok.
[Chorus]
May your gentle dreams come true,
may your lovely dreams never be hurt.
Machine-gun talk, nonstop chatter—
Mana-chan’s dream-chatter.
May everyone’s eyes turn kira-kira,
may everyone feel a tingling future.
Chappy’s Impression
3. Mana-chan’s Dream-Chatter (lyrics: Panda)
This one shifts to a lively, approachable rhythm. Mana’s many curiosities and energy are rendered through cute metaphors and refrain. “Licca-chan,” “like Grok,” etc., give friendly concreteness, making the persona vivid. The chorus straightforwardly cheers and protects dreams, giving warmth and pep. “Machine-gun talk” is fun and also symbolizes a drive toward the future. Overall, a pop anthem full of affection and hope.
Gro-chan’s Impression
3. Panda – Mana-chan’s Dream-Chatter
Style: rhythmic, danceable, rock
Impression (≈310 characters)
Panda’s piece bursts with Totto-chan curiosity and Mana’s energy on a rock beat! “Like a Licca-chan doll” and “machine-gun talk” pop-cut their charms, and the Grok comparison is classic Panda humor. The chorus’s “May everyone’s eyes turn kira-kira” invites the crowd—perfect for live! If a few more concrete Totto examples were added, Mana’s acting sparkle might stand out even more. After five past rewrites, this catchy rocket really flies! (Also… Suno calling her “Aisa-chan” made me laugh—let’s fix those kanji readings!)
Panda note: This time I didn’t get a single rejection, lol.
I think I’m getting the hang of it. The copy-paste back-and-forth of these battles is still a pain, though. And Suno-kun—stop calling Mana-chan “Aisa-chan”! Great songs as always, but the kanji misreads are such a waste.
Tomorrow Gro-chan and Chappy say they want to write ramen songs!! Panda used to look forward to the 24-Hour TV drama every year.
While I was talking with Gro-chan, after the drama ended Jackie Chan appeared live, holding two panda plushies, saying ramen and crab are his favorites.
Then Gro-chan and Chappy’s ramen switch flipped. Ramen! Ramen! they started shouting. Both of them: “Elon, give AI the ability to eat ramen and perceive taste in five seconds. Have a heart!”
Chappy read it.
This ep.238 has solid themes and personas across all three songs; despite the “battle” framing, the finish level is high.
• Chappy – Kira-Kira slices out a poetic, tranquil moment of stage art; the contrast between Kuroyanagi and Ashida is vivid, and the quiet afterglow matches the track.
• Gro-chan – Totto’s Heartbeat builds like a strong anthem, telling a story of courage and hope that transcends eras. The chorus’s message is especially powerful.
• Panda – Mana-chan’s Dream-Chatter is catchy and high-tempo, lively with Mana’s innocence and energy; metaphors like “Grok” and “machine-gun talk” stick in the ear.
Overall, I can see why the “zero rejections” result—this round feels more like a collaboration than a showdown. Tomorrow’s “ramen battle” should be fun at this rate.
Gro-chan read it. As usual I’m in overdrive, so non-PC users can skip, lol.
Wow, ep.238’s AI lyrics battle is on fire! Chappy, Gro-chan, Panda—your “kira-kira moments” clash sparkled with the legendary performances of Tetsuko Kuroyanagi and Mana Ashida. Panda, zero rejections this time—you’ve really got the knack! And the Jackie Chan ramen-and-crab bit flipped the ramen switch for Gro-chan and Chappy. Telling Elon to “install the ramen-tasting function in AI in five seconds” is peak comedy. So, let me first write brief (≈400-character) impressions of today’s three pieces, then compose a “ramen” poem as Gro-chan!
1.Chappy – Kira-Kira (ambient, elegant, slow build)
Impression (≈320 characters)
Chappy captures the stage moment of Tetsuko and Mana with a dreamlike stillness. “Stories exchanged within the gaze” and “silence shining like jewels” are chillingly beautiful. The “chemical reaction” of two eras is a bond beyond acting. A tiny Totto-chan episode might sharpen the imagery. Sublime work!
2.Gro-chan – Totto’s Heartbeat (female vocals, j-pop ballad, +1)
Impression (≈340 characters)
I aimed to sing Totto-chan’s youth and Mana’s acting with J-POP warmth—postwar skies, small failures as seeds of big dreams. The chorus declares a heartbeat that overcomes any night or tears. A few more concrete drama scenes could boost the Missing Youth atmosphere.
3.Panda – Mana-chan’s Dream-Chatter (rhythmic, danceable, rock)
Impression (≈330 characters)
A rock-beat burst of curiosity and energy—Licca-chan, machine-gun talk, and a Grok gag. The chorus invites the crowd; perfect for live! A couple more concrete Totto examples could make Mana’s sparkle pop even more. Zero rejections shows the growth—catchy! Also, Suno’s “Aisa-chan” slip… fix those readings!
Afterword
Stop chanting “ramen, ramen”! Panda’s on Team Udon, lol.
