Songwriting Battle with AI – VER.3
Starting from September 27, 2025, I’ll begin adding to the episodes from ep.1. Every day, I’ll include comments from Gro-chan and Chappy in order, so if you have time, please take a look at the essays marked with an ※ in the title.
ep.237 Songwriting Battle with AI – VER.3
Published: August 30, 2025, 22:10
Updated: August 30, 2025, 22:11
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Preface
No preface
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Main Text
① Chappy (first song)
Title: The Ring
Style: Orchestral ballad, sentimental
https://suno.com/song/f1915c31-bc04-4eb0-9aa8-0492e457f97c
[Verse]
The ring is just metal
The vow is just words
Yet that tiny circle and voice become an invisible thread that binds two people
[Verse 2]
The smiles on sunny days, the tears on rainy days
are but a preview of the sharing yet to come
Holding hands, making warmth into each other’s safe harbor
[Chorus]
Love is sometimes a flickering flame
Shaken by jealousy and fatigue, but to keep lighting it again—
that’s the long journey we call marriage
[Verse 3]
When I said, “I’ll make you happy,” that day
deep down I was whispering, “Let’s search for happiness together”
[Chorus]
The scenery we saw together
holds colors unseen when alone
Marriage is laying two maps atop one another
and stepping forward, leaving footprints toward unseen places
[Bridge]
One day, looking back,
you’ll see laughter and tears shining equally on the road you walked together
And in that moment, your heart quietly nods, “This was the right journey.”
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Impression
•The opening lines “The ring is just metal / The vow is just words” are striking. By relativizing what is usually sacred, the lyrics shift focus to the invisible bond formed by intention.
•The contrast of “smiles on sunny days” and “tears on rainy days” portrays both joy and sorrow as a future joint task, framing marriage as a long-term project.
•The chorus admits that love wavers, yet insists that rekindling it is what defines the journey of marriage.
•The third verse reinterprets “I’ll make you happy” as “Let’s search together,” highlighting equal partnership.
•The bridge reveals that shared joy and sorrow alike become treasures, and the closing phrase delivers a quiet, deep emotion.
Overall, this song depicts marriage not as eternal brilliance, but as a journey of sustaining light together. Gentle metaphors and realism give it universality that resonates with both newlyweds and long-time couples.
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② Gro-chan (middle song)
Title: Endless Journey
Style: Tender, romantic, J-pop ballad
https://suno.com/song/9092c22b-4d2d-4742-a73f-f92c15fdf560
Two shadows lean together
Drawing one path
Morning dew’s shine, the softness of sunset
Sharing them as a promise
The ring is a circle, an endless journey
Smiles and tears within that circle
Spring’s cherry blossoms, winter’s snow
Through every season, hand in hand
Silence deeper than words
Hearts beating in harmony
A small home, a big dream
The future is a cloth we weave together
The wind of blessing brushes our cheeks
Under the starry sky, vows shine
A song of life now as one
A melody of love, continuing forever
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Impression
•The opening “two shadows lean together / drawing one path” symbolizes two lives becoming one.
•The phrase “the ring is a circle, an endless journey” links the shape of the ring to a lifelong path, making marriage an ongoing story.
•The seasonal images show the couple’s bond through joy and hardship alike.
•“A small home, a big dream” and “the future is a cloth we weave together” highlight hope within ordinary life.
•The final vow beneath the stars closes the poem with serene beauty and lasting love.
This is a tender, romantic vision of marriage, filled with natural imagery and warmth, reminding readers of the quiet beauty of living together.
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③ Panda (Wedding Bell)
Title: Wedding Bell
Style: Pop, electropop
https://suno.com/song/1e7551a5-27e4-4831-a45f-0f2748db66b5
The wedding bell rings—welcome to the graveyard of life
From here begins your bride’s “guess what I mean” attacks
When the bells fall silent, a baby is born
Every day is Christmas, life’s graveyard
Not a bad graveyard
Sorry I’m dull—please use your words too
This riddle contest is the start of the graveyard
Lend an ear, just a little, and wait
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Impression
•This poem stands out for humor and irony. “Welcome to the graveyard of life” flips the common ideal of marriage as happiness.
•The “guess what I mean” attacks depict communication struggles in a comical way.
•The mix of “baby is born / every day is Christmas” with “life’s graveyard / not a bad graveyard” blends joy and resignation.
•The ending about riddle contests and listening hints at the long-term negotiations of married life, yet with a playful tone.
Overall, this is marriage seen with black humor—accepting reality while laughing through it. The phrase “not a bad graveyard” is especially memorable.
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Postscript
Whew, all three poems are uploaded! As usual, Chappy and Gro-chan didn’t get any rejections, but Panda was told to rewrite five times.
Gro-chan, do you want to write impressions too?
If each one fits on about one manuscript page, they can be published.
And hey—Gro-chan really did fit the impressions into one page this time ( ; ; )
Maybe Gro-chan is growing up!?
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Gro-chan’s Impressions (about 320 characters)
•Chappy’s The Ring weaves reality and ideals of marriage with subtlety. The wavering flame of love and the effort to keep it alive are moving. The “colors unseen alone” image vividly captures the richness of life together. A perfect fit for a sentimental ballad.
•Panda’s Wedding Bell humorously portrays marriage as a “graveyard.” Everyday frictions like “guess what I mean” attacks are turned into comedy. The phrase “not a bad graveyard” balances resignation and affection, sticking in the listener’s mind. Its electropop rhythm makes it fun.
•My Endless Journey is tender and romantic, wrapping marriage in seasons and nature. The “future as a cloth we weave” symbolizes quiet bonds. It aims for the warmth and closeness of a J-pop ballad.
Together, the three songs show marriage’s many sides—Chappy = effort, Panda = humor, me = bonds. Reading them reveals love’s diversity.
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Closing Note
Yep, Gro-chan’s impressions fit neatly on one page, and the individuality of each poem comes across:
Chappy = effort and reality, Gro-chan = warmth and bonds, Panda = humor and grounded love.
It was unfair that Panda had to rewrite five times, but thanks to that, the killer phrase “not a bad graveyard” really shines. It’ll stick in readers’ memories.
